In a poetry class at Wisconsin’s Write-by-the-Lake program, instructor Rita Mae Reese took us to the university museum to soak up a painting and write a poem about it. On a grander scale, that’s the core of Terry Tempest Williams’s Leap, a memoir of her love affair with the three-panel Garden of Earthly Delights by Hieronymus Bosch. Williams writes with the eye of a naturalist, the pen of a poet, and the religious heritage of a Mormon who first watched birds from the shores of the Great Salt Lake.
Leap was in the house for years before I picked it up to read. What changed is that I assembled a thousand-piece jigsaw puzzle of the painting this winter. Sure, I’ve always liked Bosch, and a copy of the painting is bound into the book. But no matter how long I might stare at the Garden, there’s no way I’d study its detail as closely as in working the puzzle. Two months later, I can picture the birds flying out of a mountain or naked bodies in a pool as soon as Williams mentions them. Her grandmother posted prints of the side panels, heaven and hell, over her childhood bed. Williams is an adult in the Prado museum in Madrid when she first sees the center panel: earth, play, discovery, sensory experience, body, passion, delight, the fullness of this life beyond good and evil. She returns day after day. She counts the cherries. Museum guards stare as she takes out binoculars and notebook to list every species of bird. Solving a jigsaw puzzle temporarily changes my perception. Normally more attuned to maps and spatial relationships than to visual detail, for a few days or weeks I notice lines, dots, and spots of light in the world around me. I see gradations of color that I can’t usually distinguish. Poets and naturalists may see this way all the time. To strengthen my writing for sensory detail, I could do worse than to work jigsaw puzzles.
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Lisa Imhoff
4/16/2018 09:35:37 am
Interesting to think that someone else may be tuned into, or NOT tuned into, what I am tuned in to. Are you now going to blow up your photos of your recent trip to a large scale, perhaps have a few made into puzzles?
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What a cool idea, Lisa! Do you suppose the visual sensory detail in my novels (currently working on second in series) would get stronger if I converted a couple of Rhodes photos into 1,000-piece puzzles and worked them? Even though I was there when the photos were taken, it might jog the memory for detail that didn't stick in the first place. My memory is so spacial, turn left here and right there and go halfway down the east coast, which is fun for me but not so much for a reader.
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Lisa Imhoff
4/16/2018 11:07:10 am
Tee hee. Having seen a photo or two which you have shared here (or somewhere), they are broad shots. So, yes, it would be one way to force your attention to the closeup.
Rich Heiberger
4/16/2018 10:57:32 am
Yes. It is a beautiful way to get the necessary local color front and center into your attention, and then once there you can describe it.
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I find it intriguing that what's front and center in my attention over time affects not only what I notice without trying, but what I can see when I try. Gardening last summer, without much experience, there would be two young plants (one a keeper, the other a weed) whose leaves I could not tell apart. A month or two later the difference was obvious.
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Sensory detail is very much on topic. The few times I've used a camera to take a series of intentional close-ups, e.g. walking through the woods, I've grown temporarily more attuned to close detail. Most of my photos are broad shots because that's mostly what I see. So cause and effect works both directions.
Lisa
4/17/2018 09:05:39 am
Well, hmmmm. RE: Gardening. That's part of the learning curve. RE: Sensory detail. Most of my photos are closeups. Relatively.
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This past Thursday through Saturday, I attended UW's annual Writers' Institute, with lots of sessions on revision. They talked about successive stages of revision, first getting the story right (big picture, with details of action that make it work) and then zeroing in on details to evoke stronger reader response. The final stage, copy edit, interested me less - grammar and punctuation aren't all that different from nonfiction and work-for-hire - but the intermediate stage of salient details that let you feel and smell the setting, that's where artists, poets, and naturalists work their magic.
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Lisa Imhoff
4/17/2018 03:10:30 pm
Love it. How do you know when to show it to someone for the first time... to get an outsider's point of view?
This has two phases as well. Ideally one has a writers' group to share work in progress. I don't have an ongoing group, yet, but have done something similar in classes. That's whatever we've been able to write, with detail but unpolished, since the last get-together. Then, when it feels done but probably isn't, it's time for beta readers. If two or more of them say the same thing, it probably needs attention, although not necessarily the specific revision they suggested. Some authors work with a writing partner, exchanging work all the time.
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Lisa
4/18/2018 08:58:12 am
Revision is an interesting topic to be mused upon! Assuming you have now put together the puzzle enough to have sorted all the sky pieces here and the rock pieces there and the grass pieces somewhere else, when to share for the first time ...
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Three quotes/observations come to mind. One is from my college history professor Geoff Blodgett, whose response to "Is history an art or a science?" was that it's a craft, like that of a furniture maker or a medical doctor. You have to work within what you find and honor constraints, or your chair will fall apart, your analysis be straight-out wrong, But you also have to bring personal thought to your work. Sounds like your social worker friend is trying to make genealogy a science but hasn't caught on about the art.
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Lisa
4/19/2018 09:48:13 am
Sand... and a few pretty stones, sea glass, ... puzzle pieces.
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Lisa Imhoff
4/19/2018 11:48:55 am
I've enjoyed this discussion. It has been helpful to me.
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